But what happens if a haiku gives you more options to divide the words in it into phrase and fragment? Then it is better to write it in a line, so the readers themselves can discern the different combinations. Even some oneliners can be arranged in the shape of a ring, so you can start reading it from any word you like.
Here is one:
To agree, Maya.
ReplyDelete__That which I learned of haiku/senryu in the past... the definitive content
and direction of each... I will continue to hold my mindset, my opinions of haiku/senryu, and their historic differances. Others can change and alter historic requirements if they will, but within my lack of intellect, I will not. Language differances than impinge on -sound counting- I believe -are- necessary changes to their form, that 5/7/5 format.
__Oooops, sorry to bore you. I'll visit again and be much less opinionated. Smiles_! _m
Hi, Magyar, we, people, are different and that's a good thing, isn't it :)
ReplyDeleteShoshin (初心) - a beginner's mind
i think it's a good idea to start from the beginning every few months and that's what i try to do