a murder of crows
drawing dusk into the sky
... news of war
ято гарвани
рисува мрак по небето
...новини за война
un stol de ciori
conturând apusul în cer
...știri de război
Translated into Romanian by Corneliu Traian Atanasiu
Intense. I love that second line.
ReplyDeleteBill, I'm so happy to hear from - and to know what you think of my haiku.
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